Nice one Robby. Gotta love airships and medieval architecture. You had mentioned wanting feedback so here's a paint over - http://i.imgur.com/4k8Zj.jpg
Your image is successful in drawing, story, lighting but I felt it could be pushed for more depth. It also works surprisingly well for a square and somewhat symmetrical composition. That said, it seemed like it wanted to be a vertical comp to put focus on the airships, soaring architecture and bridges.
Thanks for the paint over. I was wondering why the PO was so dark, until I looked at it on a real monitor... I knew my laptop screen was dark, but it's worse than I realized. Anyway, I used a lot of your ideas, and tried to incorporate them in a way that isn't just flat out copying it. I'll hit it with levels at school tomorrow, and hope for the best..
I know I say this after every painting I make, but next time I'm spending MUCH more time in the beginning stages. No rendering until I have it designed!!!
Nice one Robby. Gotta love airships and medieval architecture. You had mentioned wanting feedback so here's a paint over - http://i.imgur.com/4k8Zj.jpg
ReplyDeleteYour image is successful in drawing, story, lighting but I felt it could be pushed for more depth. It also works surprisingly well for a square and somewhat symmetrical composition. That said, it seemed like it wanted to be a vertical comp to put focus on the airships, soaring architecture and bridges.
Anyway, hope that's of some use. Cheers
Thanks for the paint over. I was wondering why the PO was so dark, until I looked at it on a real monitor... I knew my laptop screen was dark, but it's worse than I realized. Anyway, I used a lot of your ideas, and tried to incorporate them in a way that isn't just flat out copying it. I'll hit it with levels at school tomorrow, and hope for the best..
ReplyDeleteI know I say this after every painting I make, but next time I'm spending MUCH more time in the beginning stages. No rendering until I have it designed!!!
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